考研英语黄皮书写作练习月典型问题汇总第二套小作文 推荐信

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第二套小作文：推荐信 Part A Directions:

Write a letter to a friend of yours to

1) recommend one of your favorite news app and 2) give reasons for your recommendation.

You should write about 100 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead. Do not write the address. (10 points)

同学作文：

Dear friends:

I’m writing the letter to you in purpose of recommending my favorite news app that is BBC News. There are three recommendation reasons to it for you.

Firstly, BBC News, one of the most popular English reading app, have a telephone-number readers around the world. Secondly, it not only sends valuable opinions and special views but also makes me read fresh and cool. Last, my preferable news app can do a good job in my learning English. I’d like to thank you for you read and look forward to you all is well

Your sincerely,

Li Ming





老师打分及评语：

评分：5分



评语：清晰流畅，包含了多处要点，采用了简单的衔接手法，层次清晰；有一些语法及词汇错误。

老师修改的具体问题：

Dear friends:

I＇m writing the letter to you in purpose of[1] recommending my favorite news app that is[2] BBC News. There are three recommendation reasons to it for you[2].

[1] 固定用法 for the purpose of

[2] 去掉that is，或将that is改为破折号

[3] 凌乱且不符合句法，建议改为three reasons for my recommendation


Firstly, BBC News, one of the most popular English reading app, have[4] a [5]telephone-number [6]readers around the world. Secondly, it not only sends [7] valuable opinions and special[8] views but also makes me read fresh and cool[9]. Last[10], my preferable[11] news app can do a good job in my learning[12] English.

[4]注意主谓单复数一致，改为has [5] 和后面readers一致，去掉a

[6] 很亮眼！采用生动形象的词汇值得鼓励 [7] 建议改为provides [8] 建议改为insightful

[9] 宾语不完整，切忌出现这样的马虎错误。可替换为offers fresh and cool reading materials

[10] 表示“最后”的是lastly,而非last。注：You use lastly when you want to make a final point, ask a final question, or mention a final item that is connected with the other ones you have already asked or mentioned. 最后 [11]preferable意为“更合心意的、更适合的”；此处改为preferred（首选的）

[12] 建议改为can also help with learning English（有助于英语学习），表意尽量鲜明具体

I＇d like to thank you for you read[13] and look forward to you all is well[14].

[13] 口吻显得略为正式，鉴于是写给朋友的书信可以选择更非正式的表达 [14] look forward to 后面接续doing现在分词形式；可改为hope all is well with you

Your[15] sincerely,

Li Ming

[15]应该为Yours

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