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BRYSON: Right.Let s have a look at my notes here.OK.Starting with section headings...the broad divisions are good but you ll have to re-do the actual headings.I ve made some suggestions in the margins...
AMINA: OK.Thanks.
BRYSON: Now,this information on local housing...I can see why you put it there but it really isn t relevant to the approach you ve taken.
AMINA: I think I see what you mean.
BRYSON: Now...what did I say about the interviews? AMINA: I worked very hard on those.I really thought they were valuable.
BRYSON: They are,Amina,but they re very complex and rather unclear at the moment.You re going to have to spend a bit of time making the data a lot clearer.
AMINA: OK...as long as I don t have to remove them altogether...
BRYSON: No,don t worry.
AMINA: What about the chronology...the list of dates?I wasn t sure whether I should rewrite those.
BRYSON: My advice on that is to take them out.I feel it makes the whole piece appear too simplistic.
AMINA: OK,if it ll help. 剑桥英语3听力2
BRYSON: Well.Amina,thanks for letting me have your draft in such good time.
AMINA: Oh,that s alright.I was just very anxious to hear what you think of it.You can see that I decided to change the topic - I had been interested in looking at Barings Factory.
BRYSON: Oh,I think the hospital was a much better choice.In fact...well...I have to say that I thought it was good.
AMINA: Oh?
BRYSON: There s still lots of work to be done... AMINA: Oh yes...of course.
BRYSON: But there s plenty of good ideas.It opens well and the first chapter is fine but the middle section really stood out for me...most interesting.
AMINA: That s amazing because I really didn t find it a bit casy to write...
BRYSON: How long did you work on the whole thing? AMINA: Well,I spent about two or three weeks reading and doing general research and then I dashed the writing off very quickly...so about four weeks in all.
BRYSON: Well,that s aboout par for the course.You ve got a while yet to make the changes.
AMINA: Oh right...no problem... 剑桥英语3听力3
BRYSON: Now,there are a couple of other books I d like you to look at.Have you got a pen?Right...Appraaches to Local History by John Mervis...
AMINA: Right...
BRYSON: And then I think you need to think about ways of
representing interview data.Have a look at Sight and Sound by Kate Oakwell.
AMINA: Sight and Sound.
BRYSON: Then you know I m going away on holiday next week...
AMINA: Yes.
BRYSON: So when you ve made the changes I suggest you show the work to your Support Tutor.
AMINA: Support Tutor...right...
BRYSON: Then you do the proof reading...
AMINA: Proof reading ...uh-huh.When by.do you think? BRYSON: I d aim for 29 June and after that you should get it laser printed...but be careful because the computer centre closes on 10 July.
AMINA: And then I hand it in to...? BRYSON: Oh,the Faculty Office as usual.
AMINA: OK,that s fine.I think I m all set now!Thanks very much for all your help.
BRYSON: A pleasure.See you when I get back. AMINA: Yep.Thanks.Dr Bryson.Bye. BRYSON: Bye
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