现象类英语作文：学校里用手机好吗？

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Topic：Many students are using mobile phones at school now, it is a positive trend or a negative trend?

现如今越来越多的学生在学校使用手机，学生应该在学校使用手机吗？ 例文：⑴ 认为不应该

Despite the wide use of the mobile phones, I think that more or less problems will be caused by using mobile mobile phones very often.

On one hand, heavy mobile phone use may cause health problems such as memory loss and eye-sight weakness. On the other hand, mobile phones may distract students from listening to lectures. Using mobile phones in class is not only irresponsible for yourself, but also disrespectful to teachers.

Based on the above reasons, I suggest that mobile phones are not allowed at school, it is a must for every student.

⑵ 认为使用手机是可以的

Among all inventions that science and technology has brought to us, mobile phones are probably the most influential ones.

One of the reasons is that mobile phones are helpful when there is a need to contact parents from school. Especially when you are in emergency. What’s more, some school teachers are even using chatting APP to assign schoolwork, and of course a student will need a mobile phone to receive that. It has been a tool which is applicable to both students and teachers.

In a word, it is a rather obvious trend that mobile phones will be an important part in school life. （写作思路：委婉的提出自己的观点，认为压力过大并不好，一笔带过不好的原因，着重点放在建议记忆如何改善上。最后结尾处斩钉截铁的定下论断。） New Words： 1、Despite

【拓展】：in despite of

Despite the fact that....... （尽管事实如此）



不管；虽然 （后加名词）

2、more or less

1

或多或少；多多少少




3、memory loss 4、eye-sight weakness 5、distract .... from ..... 6、disrespectful

7、based on the above reasons, 8、influential

9、one of the reasons is that.... 10、in emergency 11、chatting APP 12、assign homework 13、receive 14、be applicable to

15、it is a rather obvious trend that..... Sentences:

记忆力下降 视力下降

从……方面分散…… a. 不尊敬的 基于以上的原因.... a. 有影响力的 其中一个原因是.... 紧急情况 聊天APP 布置作业 接受

适用于；适合于

.....是一个非常明显的趋势

1、Using mobile phones in class is not only irresponsible for yourself, but also disrespectful to teachers.

上课使用手机不仅是对自己的不负责任，更加是对老师的不尊敬。

（使用非谓语做开头比用单纯的“I”开头要好得多，另外，用连词not only,but also把整个句子连接起来，即整齐又分明）

2、One of the reasons is that mobile phones are helpful when there is a need to contact parents from school. Especially when you are in emergency

在学校使用手机的其中一个原因是，当你需要联系父母是，手机是非常有帮助的，特别当你处于紧急情况中的时候。

（写观点写具体，而且是更加实际的写法是非常适用的。）

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